A whiff of a familiar scent and touch that tells you a lot more
Than an entire website
Are things that allow me to travel back like a flip chart
To an age free of appearances
Lost in a strange forest with no foot tracks to guide me
I grope my way through.
I hear the sound of broken twigs cracking under my feet like
A mad drummer out of rhythm
Endless series of cobwebs brush against my face, I stare
At the vicious spiders,
Dark, poisonous, and full of guile, they give me the creeps
But I move on braving them.
It’s pointless to think of cleanliness in this state, but still
I try to keep the cobwebs away
From my thoughts and that inner core of belief that keeps
Me going through anything
I close my eyes and do the flip chart; there I am back in the light
Here I am back in the light.
And I look back at the foot track I have created.
8 comments:
Lovely poem Sam...keep it coming :)
samda..in every forest...there are trees..who live alone and together..happily..and after every forest ends...there comes a little happy civilization...and lovely poem.. :)
The goodness of a creative mind meets the realisations of a straightforward pragmatic. e-Age creeping in gives you that touch of today. Priceless.
If I could write too, I would have written something similar.. a flip between imagination and reality! Its FANTASTIC!! Don't stop here.. keep it going!!!
And your "about me" is hilarious!!! :-)
To get lost in a forest is an Elf's dream and a Dwarf’s nightmare. That mad drummer's rhythm would urge him on...the Elf will emit light...he will urge the trees to speak...But a Dwarf...lost in a forest he remembers his caves...beautifully excavated...neat and clean...he searches for light...there is a sense of suspicion in him...even the creepers appear to him as some vicious reptile...he fights and gets more and more lost. These are myths...gone are those days...still we find ourselves fighting with dangerous Hydras and their tentacles...we love them we hate them...still in the midst of hustle and bustle we find ourselves in forests...we are easily lost... Valiant human knights think of their mythic hosts...and decide how they will face the hidden dangers of this unknown forest...
Nicely crafted! I like the way both pleasure and pain are juxtaposed.
Nice use of the work ex, but frankly speaking I could hardly understand this poem. I won't mind being told more about the poem if the poet wishes to share his insight into it.
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